The Crazy Adventures of Stratos It was a normal day; I had just gotten done doing my morning patrol, and I was flying down to the Town Hall to get the list of all crimes that had happened all over the state. For those who don’t know me, I am Stratos. I am basically Captain America, Thor, and Superman all mixed into one, except I am way more handsome than all of them. I come from a planet of super beings, so basically like every other alien superhero who came to earth’s story, but the fact that I decided to be here and that I wasn’t the biggest or baddest alien on the planet sets me apart. I guess you could say that I appreciate having power. That doesn’t mean I haven’t gotten a big head from all this power. Its kind of something I must have, you know? Character flaws make the character have more depth and reliability; all the writers out there will understand. Anyway, back to the story. I had just gotten the paper when I fell a cold shiver run down my back. I could recognize that feeling anywhere. It was my brother, Phere. He is the bad me. He was like the one bad friend you had from across the track. He zoomed up behind me and sucker punched me in the bacl of the head before I could even turn around. I thought it was a coward move on his part, but not all of use have great and amazing principles like me. I dropped to the floor in anger and disbelief. I jumped up and tackled him in the air as we get ready to have one of those epic fight scenes that you see in movies. He threw me off and we stared at each other knowing what was about to happen. We both flew to each other at such a speed our impact made a shock wave. I quickly landed a handful of shots, as I am clearly the more superior twin. This was going to be an easy victory because I have beaten him before on numerous occasions. Why he even bother if he knows I'm going to win was beyond me. I thought this was funny because after this he was just going to get mad and fly to another planet to cry and plan his next attack. He might try his best, but he was no match for me and my skill. I continued to hit Jim until he gave up. He fell and landed on the floor as he got his butt beaten. I landed at his feet and smirked as if to say what's up, bro. He nervously looked around as the crowd surrounded him. He got so embarrassed that he just jumped up and flew away as fast as he could.
1)List one thing you've learned from writing this paper that you can apply to other writing assignments. What will that look like?
I learned that you have to know your whole story before you write it. It will look like my stories being better planed out.
2)Identify a specific revision you were asked to make and explain why (this can be at any stage of the writing process). How did you revise? What did you learn?
I was told that I had to fix my spelling and have to get my story to flow better, I will do that by planning out my story better and choosing my words better.
3)What are the conventions of a summary and how did you meet those in this assignment?
It is unique because it is the only one that tells a story and can be from someone else's point of view.
4)Given more time to work on this assignment, how would you improve it?
I would make a more detailed story and make the story flow a little better and I would also choose the ending better.
5)What is one thing you're proud of in this paper?